Desperately ISO

[rivkat]

Beta reader to tell me what's wrong with a SV slash story, about 40 pages long. It's giving me hell and I can't tell why. Please comment or write RivkaT@aol.com.

Also, today I am 30. It doesn't feel as significant as general culture tells me it ought. Z did, however, get me three perfect gifts: OS X.2 (Jaguar), chocolate sorbet, and a freaky-looking centipede in a box, to go with my spider, leaf bug, and shiny beetle.

I will get back to reviews soon.

Comments

Ah shit!

[mustangsally78.livejournal.com]

You know, I am always marking your birthday as being the 10th. Why is that?

Hello and welcome to the thirties - it's all downhill from here!

Kisses

Sally

[barely-bean.livejournal.com]

RivkaT,

You want to send me the SV story and I can take a look at it? you can email me at carofic@illuminatedtext.com

[barely-bean.livejournal.com]

Also, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

Re: Ah shit!

[rivkat.livejournal.com]

All April birthdays are the same. The Body Shop even says so -- I have a coupon for a free goodie any time during the month of my birth.

So in that spirit, happy birthday to you!

Hey, do you have a non-Amazon wish list? I don't like using Amazon, for silly reasons, but Half.com has one.

[valentinemichel.livejournal.com]

Happy Birthday!

I'll be happy to beta. Email: valentinemichel@livejournal.com

Oooh, and let me know what you think about Jaguar.

Re: Ah shit!

[mustangsally78.livejournal.com]

Yeah 3D Naked Spike always works.

I have no list :::hangs head::: that's too organized for me.

Just- for the love of God Montresor, NO MORE COFFEE MUGS! MamaStang has instituted a COFFEE MUG BAN.

Sally

[prillalar]

Many happy returns! 30 is the coolest year.

[corinna-5.livejournal.com]

Happy birthday!

And if you need more eyes on the story, it's adanvers at yahoo dot com.

[amandajane5.livejournal.com]

Happy Birthday! Congratulations for reaching 30! This will be a good year!

[rageprufrock.livejournal.com]

Rivkat, I'd be happy to look over your story, though I'm sure the situation isn't nearly as bad as you're thinking it is (something "wrong"? pa-shaw). Just email me at prufrock@earthlink.net

[claire.livejournal.com]

Happy 30!

[estepheia.livejournal.com]

Happy birthday!
I'd give you naked Clex with chocolate syrup on top - alas I've never written anything SV.
Enjoy your birthday.

[celli]

*hugs* happy birthday!

[rivkat.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I need to pound out one more scene and then I'll send it.

[rivkat.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Z. already has Jaguar, and likes it a lot. I may need more RAM, but I'm told Jaguar will speed things up regardless.

[svilleficrecs.livejournal.com]

Congrats, and if you want another pair of eyes for your story, my email address is idontwannawait@hotmail.com

[scribblinlenore.livejournal.com]

Hey, I know I'm kind of late, but if you still need beta readers, I'd love to volunteer.

And happy belated birthday!

[meret.livejournal.com]

First off - Happy Birthday! You know the thing about women hitting their sexual peak in their 30s? It's true. (big smile)

If you still need a beta reader, you're welcome to send me the story. meret118@netscape.net

[aelita.livejournal.com]

Happy birthday!

[lavita.livejournal.com]

Happy of birthdays, darlin'.
If you still need a beta I'd love to help, but it looks like you're covered. Happy Saturday !

[haphazardmethod.livejournal.com]

Happy birthday to you! I'm not sure why folks fear turning 30; my 30s have been great. I hope yours will be too.

[silveraspen]

Happiest of Birthdays to you! 30 is a great year, judging from my own and various friends' experiences. Have a lovely day and year to follow!

BTW, Jaguar's fun too. Or at least, I'm enjoying it, for what that's worth. :)