Desperately ISO

[rivkat]

Beta reader to tell me what's wrong with a SV slash story, about 40 pages long. It's giving me hell and I can't tell why. Please comment or write RivkaT@aol.com.

Also, today I am 30. It doesn't feel as significant as general culture tells me it ought. Z did, however, get me three perfect gifts: OS X.2 (Jaguar), chocolate sorbet, and a freaky-looking centipede in a box, to go with my spider, leaf bug, and shiny beetle.

I will get back to reviews soon.

Comments

[meret.livejournal.com]

First off - Happy Birthday! You know the thing about women hitting their sexual peak in their 30s? It's true. (big smile)

If you still need a beta reader, you're welcome to send me the story. meret118@netscape.net