Desperately ISO

[rivkat]

Beta reader to tell me what's wrong with a SV slash story, about 40 pages long. It's giving me hell and I can't tell why. Please comment or write RivkaT@aol.com.

Also, today I am 30. It doesn't feel as significant as general culture tells me it ought. Z did, however, get me three perfect gifts: OS X.2 (Jaguar), chocolate sorbet, and a freaky-looking centipede in a box, to go with my spider, leaf bug, and shiny beetle.

I will get back to reviews soon.

Comments

[rivkat.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Z. already has Jaguar, and likes it a lot. I may need more RAM, but I'm told Jaguar will speed things up regardless.