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[rivkat]

Incarnadine, part the second.

ETA: Please, read the revised version here. I really think there are significant improvements.

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I cried, in the best way

[(Anonymous)]

There's only one canonically-confusing issue: Martha
seems to be already working for Lionel, yet the sex seems to be directly after "Red" and hence before "Nocturne." You could remove the Martha-working-for-Lionel references, leaving open the implication that Martha took the job in part to protect Lex, to keep an eye on things chez Luthor. Even though I haven't seen "Nocturne" yet, I have this theory that Martha believes in "keep your enemies closer," and took the job because she suspects Lionel of knowing Too Much about Clark.

happy, happy, happy.

Mary Ellen
Doctor teary Science

Re: I cried, in the best way

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Thanks for the comments. I meant to set this after Nocturne, with a whole new and different red K exposure, and I'll try to make that clearer.