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[rivkat]

Incarnadine, part the second.

ETA: Please, read the revised version here. I really think there are significant improvements.

Comments

you're not going to hell. . .

[(Anonymous)]

you're going to heaven for that incredible fic. wow. thank you. lady angel

Wow.

[chase820.livejournal.com]

This is un-freaking-believable, Rivka. I don't even watch the show regularly (frankly, I find the Spelling-esque dialogue and the heavy coating of Cover Girl base they put on all the actors off-putting), and I'm intrigued. I am in love with your sexy, tortured, brilliant, oh-so-complicated Lex. Too bad he only has eyes for Clark. . .*sigh*

Please say you're going to write lots more of these!

[ethrosdemon.livejournal.com]

I am currently stalking you by email, but I thought I would just drop you this public comment to say that I want to eat you up.

[raincitygirl.livejournal.com]

Um, wow. Just going with a wow here.

[ladyvyola.livejournal.com]

Rrrrrrrrrworrrr!

So good -- the premise, the voices, the shift from pleasure to pain, the cautious reconciliation. Just what the doctor ordered!

[rhiannonhero.livejournal.com]

Yay! Liked this muchly. Thanks for putting in the second half.

I cried, in the best way

[(Anonymous)]

There's only one canonically-confusing issue: Martha
seems to be already working for Lionel, yet the sex seems to be directly after "Red" and hence before "Nocturne." You could remove the Martha-working-for-Lionel references, leaving open the implication that Martha took the job in part to protect Lex, to keep an eye on things chez Luthor. Even though I haven't seen "Nocturne" yet, I have this theory that Martha believes in "keep your enemies closer," and took the job because she suspects Lionel of knowing Too Much about Clark.

happy, happy, happy.

Mary Ellen
Doctor teary Science

Re: I cried, in the best way

[rivkat.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the comments. I meant to set this after Nocturne, with a whole new and different red K exposure, and I'll try to make that clearer.

[eleveninches.livejournal.com]

A-fucking-mazing. I'm sitting here going, "Eeeeeee! Oh my God, eeeee!" every few seconds. The angst, the love, the historical references (Enkidu *snicker*)... The sex is hot. The Lex and Lionel scenes are painful yet amusing. The Lex and Martha scenes are so believable. I adore this story.

Oh

[honoria.livejournal.com]

Oh. Oh. My.