Hey, my first flame ever

[rivkat]

Unfortunately, I wrote two stories called "Into the Woods" in two different fandoms, so I can't tell which one sucked. The three-word critique just wasn't sufficient to distinguish them.

This doesn't actually make me feel that I've arrived or anything, but it is certainly different.

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Into the Woods

[kickair8p.livejournal.com]

Just read 'em both, and.....

The Smallville one is an insight piece on a character I don't care about, on a show I occasionally watch and in a fandom I rarely read. Still, it gets under my skin.

I'm not a M/S shipper, but for a pairing I'm not fond of the X-Files one wasn't bad. Anyway, in neither of these stories can I find suckitude. Sorry I couldn't help pin down which one your flamer meant. ::g::





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Re: Into the Woods

[rivkat.livejournal.com]

I don't actually like Lana either, but I did like the fairytale aspects; I'm glad it worked for you as much as it could under the circumstances. MSR was my first obsession once I got into online fandom, though that sex scene was pretty much unmotivated, which is why it didn't end up part of the real story.

Re: Into the Woods

[rivkat.livejournal.com]

Oh, and I hope you'll take this in the totally respectful way in which it's intended, but given your expressed preferences compared to the content of this journal I have to wonder -- what are you doing here?

Re: Into the Woods

[kickair8p.livejournal.com]

::giggle:: I wondered that myself when I realized what fandoms you wrote in. At a guess, you probably posted something witty/insightful/humorous in the comments of somebody's LJ, and I friended you to see when you did it again.

It's not like I never read SVfic. And I was impressed with the way you ended the XF "Into the Woods" -- a lot of people would've gone with "OMG! We Must Never Do This Again!" or "Now That We've Discovered Each Other Our Love MUST Be Eternal!" Your ending was more real.





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Your new story

[(Anonymous)]

Personally don't worry about the fame, I really don't think you should send them. I don't. I closest thing I do is when I really liked a story but a few things in it bothered me so that when I sent the feedback I mention them. But I was also send good positive stuff.

*hugz*

OH I REALLY want to read your Clark becomes a girl story, will you be posting it soon? I've read most of your stories now and I love your work. The last one I read was your AU story were the aliens like Clark *I don't want to like up the spelling* take over the world, and Lex is a resistance fighter. Wonderfully original and great plot. Loved the ending, Sequal? *I can only hope*
Later Girl!
Lisa Beattie *lisalbeattie@shaw.ca*

Re: Your new story

[rivkat.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the kind words. I should be posting the next story in a few days; there's one scene holding me up.

Your new story

[(Anonymous)]

Personally don't worry about the flame, I really don't think people should send them. I don't. The closest thing I do is when I really liked a story but a few things in it bothered me so that when I send the feedback I mention them. But I was mostly sending it to tell the auther how much I liked their story.

*hugz*

OH I REALLY want to read your Clark becomes a girl story, will you be posting it soon?

I've read most of your stories now and I love your work. The last one I read was your AU story where the aliens like Clark *I don't want to look up the spelling* take over the world, and Lex is a resistance fighter. Wonderfully original and great plot. Loved the ending, Sequal? *I can only hope*
Later Girl!
Lisa Beattie *lisalbeattie@shaw.ca*