Date: 2009-03-02 04:07 pm (UTC)
This has been an incredible, INCREDIBLE read. Your portrayal of how Sam's psyche works was astounding. So much so that this whole thing read like the inside of Sam's head and that's just amazing. There are so many lines here that were stellar and so very them but this particular one made my heart clench so hard it's not even funny:

But Sam hadn’t known his brother well enough to understand that he was actually breathing for two.

I don't even know WHY, but that just got to me. :D

In conclusion: YOU ROCK. ♥
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