The Story in the Way, part one

Well, I hacked away at this in order to get to the evil switch story.

Yellow
Summary: “A Kryptonian, huh? I knew this 'I'm the only one, I'm the only one' thing was just an attention-getter.”

ETA: really, read the revised version. I promise it's better.

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The Story in the Way, part two

cont.

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Notes: I read that yellow Kryptonite was “fictional,” unlike all the other kinds of Kryptonite, and somehow that turned into this.

I’m not satisfied with this, so constructive criticism welcome. The harsher you are, the more I want you to send it to RivkaT@aol.com rather than putting it here. I want help, but I’m not an exhibitionist masochist. One specific question: I should get rid of Whitney, right?