I don't mean to nitpick, Tom, but is this really your plan?

“Sammy,” Father had chuckled, “she didn’t give you anything.”

It was a scissors-stab, but he’d persisted. “Where is she now?”

Father had closed the book with a sigh. “Everywhere.”


That certainly let us know what was coming. "Everywhere." That was actually kind of beautiful, even though it described a terrible event.


I loved the way you reworked the ep to fit here.