I love the changes you've made to the whole second half - the vividness of the Lex-Kara bond here, and Clark is just so much more present, so very there even when he isn't, and able to actually articulate what went wrong like the grownup he now is. This whole world has so much color and texture, and it's like having watched it in black and white and now it's Technicolor. We're definitely not in Kansas anymore. *g* What a great story!!!
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Date: 2007-08-26 04:32 am (UTC)