I don't mean to nitpick, Tom, but is this really your plan?

Holy shit. I loved "Filthy Mind," and this is exactly right as a follow-up. I love how there's this incredible love and warmth between them, without being at all sentimental. The whole series is a scenario that could easily go wrong in the writing, but you have a delicate -- and rather acid! -- touch, that keeps it from being either cheap angst or shallow kink. The characterizations are what really sells it. Also, insanely freaking hot! \o/