It didn't feel rushed to me:) I thought the pacing was good, and I could tell from reading your other fic that some parts that you may have packed into one paragraph could have easily been stretched out for a whole chapter or more and it would have felt just as natural. You wrote so much during the time frame that I think it's amazing just how cohesive it all seems! Good job:D
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Date: 2007-12-12 03:40 am (UTC)Good job:D