I've been thinking about it, and I can imagine most of this stuff being sexy between two actual people. Physical presence can make lots of stuff hot that isn't hot on the page. So "color" didn't bother me -- I decided to give all the dialogue a pass.
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Date: 2006-04-06 02:19 pm (UTC)Thanks for the chance to mock the book!